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"Oh my gosh. ____! Look there!"

(Insert colour) eyes wandered to the direction your friend, Belle, was pointing to. You stopped dead in your tracks at the scene that held out before you.

There stood your ten-month long boyfriend, Antonio Carriedo, who was also the new foreign exchange student. He wasn't alone, yet not accompanied by his two friends, Gilbert and Francis. Instead, he was trapped in between five giggling girls, begging him for his attention. It wasn't that much of a surprise though; he was new, gorgeous, had a delicious Spanish accent and to top it off, possessed a contagiously cheerful personality.

However a major flaw in that wonderful personality of his was his obliviousness. He didn't even notice how these 'friendly' girls were getting a bit too intimate, which bothered you gravely. One was located at his left, playfully hitting his shoulder and toned back, laughing in a high-pitch tone while drawing her body closer and closer to his. The other on his right was flirting shamelessly with him, despite him not realizing how suggestive she was being. The remaining girls were obviously feeling rather bold too, letting their fingers trail up his arms or into his soft, messy, chestnut brown hair as they giggled in an air-headed manner. Seriously, were tomatoes that interesting??

You trusted Antonio, you definitely did. Yet, he really needed to learn when was 'too much'. It also didn't help that those bimbotic girls naturally got on your nerves, and let's just plainly say: you were the jealous type. You felt angry veins pop out at your forehead, resisting the urge to slap every one of those five girls and stop them from pining over your boyfriend. You weren't one to be violent, but the eerie glares you sent went unnoticed by your female classmates.

At fist, you were ecstatic when he managed to transfer (though temporarily) to your school, but everyone was so fascinated by him that it was really hard to spend any time with the adorably big-hearted boy. Despite that, the two of you had been pretty open about your relationship. So don't these girls have any shame from throwing themselves over a taken boy??

"____, is he usually like that? At this rate, it'll look as though he'll cheat on you," one of you friends said in dismay, though rather intrigued that you were actually in a relationship with this interesting Spaniard. Belle nudged you forward, urging you to do something about it. You paid no heed to these actions or words; your attention only diverted to the boy with the sun-kissed skin and his fan girls. Suddenly, you broke away from your group of friends and walked fearlessly towards the bothersome group.

Meanwhile, Antonio was smiling from ear to ear, pleased with himself at how easy it was to make friends. He easily convinced himself that the way these girls clung onto him like a lost puppy was probably 'normal' in your school, later making him wonder why you never acted the same way as they did. Speaking of which, he realized that he hasn't seen you the entire day.

'Oh! What a coincidence!' he thought, his expression lighting up even more as he saw the girl that was on his mind walk towards him.

With an unforeseen boost of confidence, you pushed away two of the girls that were in front of him, immediately receiving dirty looks from them. Surprisingly, it did not bother you. Right now, it was just you and the boy in front of you.

"Hi, __-" he was interrupted as you swiftly placed your hand behind his neck and pushed down. Your lips connected into a kiss so passionate that Antonio's mind went into swirls.

Just as he was about to pull you closer to him, you let go and went off, your head held high as you acted as though that was nothing. You walked away triumphantly from the gaping girls and your boyfriend, who had lips that were begging for more.

"That ought to show them that he's mine!" you grinned proudly as you took strides to the exit.

Meanwhile, Antonio felt his insides flutter, his cheeks turning a brilliant shade of pink as he really began to register what had just happened. A cheesy smile grazed his still-tingling lips while his emerald eyes turned to your departing figure. With that, he took off; his legs practically flying as he bounded towards you, singing out loudly in the school hallway, "Mi amor!!! Wait for me~"
Terribly sorry that this is so short compared to my other reader inserts... But nevertheless, it's Spain's turn! :D Seriously, I don't understand why people go after taken people. It's just... you know... :(
Anywayssss, I wanted to give the reader a lil more sass ;) If Spain was running and shouting that towards me, I'd probably giggle non-stop. And trip like an idiot ._.
Please tell me if I wrote anything wrongly~ No bashing though
Wouldn't it be funny if the reader slapped his *ss instead of kissing him? :iconspainapprovedplz:
How depressing, when I wrote this, I asked for your advice as to whether or not I should write the lemon. I did, and then this lemon crisis (ahaha, that sounds pretty funny) came up. I don't regret writing the lemon, but I think I should take it down or at least alter the story. But thank you to those who said I should, I had fun writing it ;)

Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya
Edit: Removing my preview images, as although I said I didn't own them and linked it back to where I found it, I don't think that's 'getting permission'
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:iconashleynwoods:
AshleynWoods Featured By Owner 14 hours ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, Spain, anyone messes with you, I punch emm in da face!
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Smartbaby11000 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member
Bad ass 😎
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AshleynWoods Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
DAWWWWWWWWWWW

Yayspain - 2nd Version Spain Icon owo Yayspain - 2nd Version Spain (Happy Cashier) [V3] Spain (Smile) [V7] 

SO MUCH SPAIN!!!
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xXf0reverN0wXx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
:iconnosebleed-plz: Nice!
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:icondb4lyfe:
DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
XD can't resist dat booteh
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:icondb4lyfe:
DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
'if the reader slapped his ass'
tbh dats probably what I would've bc dat Spanish booty
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:iconjasminecreates:
JasmineCreates Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Student Artist
I'd kill all of them. No shame.
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:iconfeliciavargas16:
FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I. Would. ... Prob not do that... I'm too shy, BUT it's a good thought hehe!! ;3))
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
ohmahgaowd! i would so be like dat! 
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AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
I laughed sooooooo hard because I'm just like the me in this story no kidding I probably would have done the same thing. Anyhow this was a really good story great job! :)
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
How about Antonio teaches me Spanish and I teach him stranger danger
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absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Writer
XD haha this is hilarious :D
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:iconkatearchan:
katearchan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Yes it was XD
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:iconabsoluteanimeaddict:
absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Can you read my america x reader and tell me what I need to fix and if it's any good?
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:iconkatearchan:
katearchan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
YES YES YES I WILL BE MORE THAN HAPPY!
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:iconabsoluteanimeaddict:
absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks!!
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:iconkatearchan:
katearchan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
No prob I all ready commented!
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RaivisLatviaGalante Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Writer
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Sealand emote Kiku Honda -Japan- Answers [Hetalia Axis Power] .America (The Hero) [V2] 
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Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Awesome job!! Loved the part when Spain thought he made new friends x3
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xXf0reverN0wXx Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Hehe! He's dense like that! (A reason why I love him :3)
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Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
True That Stamp 
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SpongebobsMoustache Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Artist
Reader did like a punk ass bitch XDDD
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DatPotatoArtist Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
:iconspainapprovedplz:
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creativehelper14 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
He thought he made friends...
XD
Love it!
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LithiaMystery Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spain (Happy Cashier) [V3] 
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:iconemzyblue:
emzyblue Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
:spainaprovedplz: 
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kanazakiHaria Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014   Artist
Wow
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Kloofh Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHAT? Clap 
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Bigpokey02 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
:iconspainnosebleedplz:
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deaththekit Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
TEEHEEHEE !!! * goes of fangirling somewhere*
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hetalianerds Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
I really love this story please continue it
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spainlover1010 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Awwww more
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GlowKit Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Writer
oh sweet jebus, where is this lemon? i must read it!!
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR ME TOO!!!!!!! If you have found it can I have the link? 
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
I am am like every nationality So would this count as incest? XD ~
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He's Mine Bitchess So Back Off!
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my bf in real life is Spanish and looks a but like Spain so HAHA in your face ;3; (not trying to be mean just being funny you know ;u;) 
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's So AWESOME!
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR!! *squeals* 
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Right *squeals*
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SQUEEEEEE *fangirls over her awesome bf*
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*grins* what he is hot *swoons* 
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Lousiey Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh hell no! Spain. and. Germany. Are. All. Mine. :iconhellnoplz: :iconbitchpleaseplz: :iconspain
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

(I was referring to the story)

Well you can have thim Canada is MINE! :iconcanadablushplz:

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Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THAT PICTURE OF CANADA MAKE ME JUST WANNA HUG HIM FOREVER!!!!!!!!! *awww's over how inhumanly cute he looks* 
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HES MINE SO BACK OFF!!!! *growls*
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sky: *back up* All I said was that I thought he looked cute ;n; *hides behind Germany* DONT KILL ME I'M SORRY!!!!!! 
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kitty: Its ok I wont hurt you I can get very defensive when people try and touch my possessions

Canada: Possessions?
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